Writing a Narrative

In 2013 20th of Feb a boy and his friend went to rainbow end crazy rides in hilow city . His name was John and his friend his name is Jack they are both 13 years old why they were there is because of John little sister she is very vain . And what she want’s is what she get her name is Rose and she is now 9 years old . The first ride they went on was the globed maloon . but then when they were at the halfway of the ride .They we're stack they tried to get out but the belts were stuck. And they had to wait for hours and there were more people to that were stuck to. there was mechanic coming but they were to late the ride went down and everybody died